如何在雅思写作中用数据说话

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发表于:2015-07-17 14:55 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

         在雅思大作文的写作中,烤鸭们总是很苦恼,不知道该如何展开论点。


         今天就教各位烤鸭一招。


        



          出招之前,先看两个例子吧~~



一、 题目大意: 20年后,人们会有更多休闲时间。 


      “Twenty years from now on, people will have more leisure time than they do now.”

 

         数据支持:人们休闲时间越来越多可以通过调查人们在19952005工作时长的减少反映出来。

 

       “Secondly, the working time of people has become much shorter, thus resulting in people's preference for more leisure time. According to 1995 and 2005 surveys conducted by Human Resources Department, people worked 8 hours every day in 2005 while people in 1995 worked almost 9 hours each day. The shortened work time is caused by the wide use fo machines.”



二、  题目大意: 现在更难以去判断一项工作是否成功。


        “It was easier to identify what jobs or careers were secure and successful in the past than it is now.”


          数据支持:通过一项问卷调查来说明现在人们打破了以前铁饭碗的观念,开始从事其他类别的工作,从而证明人们对于成功工作的定义变得多样化。


         “Additionally, a questionnaire about choosing an ideal job conducted by Career Service Center in China has surveyed two groups of people with the first at the age of 50 and above and the second aged from 20 to 30. 58.4%. According to the above survey, 32.5% of the first group respectively choose the option of civil servants and teachers. On the contrary, 72.4% of the second group circled the third option of other occupations such as singers, freelance writers and so on. The difference in the two groups of figures lies in the transition of people's attitude of choosing a job.”


               给出数据的表达,可以总结为:

             

1. 

              A 年份 survey/ report, conducted by 组织/机构/xxx university, (after polling xxx 人群 aged x and x) proved that xx% a, xx% b, xx% c...

 

2

             According to 年份 surveys, conducted by 组织/机构, shows that...









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