2015.07.28【中译英】授权翻译《芍园·红线错》前尘事 [09]

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“莳夫人,夫人说,房间要换些吊兰挂挂,来问莳夫人准备好了么?”

"Madam Foster, her ladyship wants to know if you have got the bracket-plants she ordered for the rooms ready."


郑平的声音将郑瑞唤回现实,不远处,莳夫人正在让一个丫鬟模样的小女孩到花房将一盆细叶旺盛的金边吊兰取出,正待递到郑平手中,却听见郑平发出一声惨绝人寰的尖叫!

Ping's voice draws Rui back. Not far away, Madam Foster makes a little girl bring out a bowl of leafy chlorophytum of fine golden-edge leaves. While she is handing it to Ping, he screams out horribly!


那个小丫鬟却也被郑平吓到了,手一松,整盆吊兰砸到地上,上好的紫砂花盆霎时摔成几块。

The girl seems scared by Ping's scream, slipping the precious container, which then falls into pieces on the ground.

那个丫鬟似乎看到自己闯祸了,发出“呀”的一声,连忙跑到莳夫人背后躲了起来。

Realizing that she has caused a damage, the girl makes a cry, hiding herself behind Madam Foster.

也正在此时,郑瑞却也看到了他从没有想看到的画面:那个小丫鬟长着一张和江离一样的脸。十二岁的江离,一模一样。

In the meantime, Zheng sees what he never imaged: the little girl looks exactly like Li Jiang at her 12.


那张脸郑瑞永远不会忘记,是那样可爱、天真,又带着一丝小小的狡猾。

That's a face Zheng would never forget, so lovely, so pure, and a little cunning.

那脸蛋、那眼睛、那嘴唇,简直是一个模子里刻出来的。

Their face, eyes, and lips seem coming out from the same mold.

他也一下明白了郑平会尖叫的原因。

Zheng readily sees why Ping screamed.

郑平是从小就跟他一起长大的家奴,自然也见到过小时候的江离。

Having grown up with Rui, Ping, of course, met Jiang when she was 12.

更何况不日前才看到江离的尸体,如今却看到一个活生生的、长得跟江离一样的女孩子。

Furthermore, he has just seen her body these days, yet now sees a living girl who exactly resembles her.

郑瑞想如果当时是他跟那个小丫鬟面对面,虽说也许不会像郑平这般大失仪态,但也绝对不会像现在这般冷静。

Zheng knows that he mightn't have lost composure if it had been him who saw the little girl then, but would never have been as calm as now.

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