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政府该把fund给health and education of public还是给art。
It is a extremely serious issue for government to consider to which the fund should be given, art or public health and education. After taking some points into account, I side with health and education of public for following reasons.
It is not exaggerate to state that health is thefoundation
foundermental of every thingeverything for all living creature in our earth. I mage that, if all the folk living in a country have some diseases, such as coronary heart disease, hypertension, obesity and so on, could his state become a strong force in military, economy. DefinetelyDefinitely, the answer is not for the characters do not have as much energy as healthy ones in other countries to direct into protecting their homeland and producing goods, In addition, education is becoming an essential factor, at least more important than art, in nowadays force competing society. Without aan advanced education, a country will be threw out of safety sooner or later as they will be lack of way to attain knowledge of edge indulstryindustry technologies, which leads to a bright future in life qulityquality.
AdmitedelyAdmittedly, art is also cristalcritical. Art serves as an independent part when we relax. For example, at current, music, one of form human being use to relax, is relatively provilentprevalent. It seems that without music, our day will be tedious. However, at is not the thing people cannot lose, although important, since there still are some individuals that do not care about art at all.
Because health is the basic of our life, education is the key for our country to develop, while art is only the way to relax, government should give money to the more important factor--education and health.
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