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发表于:2014-06-20 14:36 [只看楼主] [划词开启]
题目:机票价格下调,positive or negative effects,write you personal experience.
正文:
With the dropping price of the airport tickets,people are having awareness of the consequences of this alternation.Whether it is a positive tendency have cause a heated debate.As for me,l insist that the lower price do good more than harm. 
Firstly,it is clear to figure out that the current ticket price which most of folks be able to afford,boost the tourist industry.a brand new field in the economy society.As a result,it bring countless benefits,increase the job opportunities,enhance the culture comprehension,strengthen the international relationship and so on.Hence,we should absolutely admit that the invention of the aviation totally alter our life to a better way and the decreased price make the benefits can be brought to more individuals,filing the gap between the impoverished and the rich to some extent.
  Moreover,the more reasonable fee of aircraft ticket can relieve the extensive pressure of the traditional transportations and also offer the public another cost-effective way.Here is a very common scene in china during the Spring Festival,the numerous out-of-term laborers cram into the train station and some of them even miss the homing train because of the limited tickets.Whereas,the affordable plane tickets actually converse this bad situation in some way,people work outside can have more channels to gather with their relatives not only in the festival day,but also any time of the daily life.
  It is not to say that this transform has no negative effects at all.We should state that the frequency of air travel may cause the energy shortage and environmental contamination.However,every transportation have these sort of back sides,which is also a challenging for the relevant department to recreate the alternative and environmental-friendly engine substitutes.
  To sum up,the adjustment of the plane tickets turn the aviation into a new mass transportation,which bring the human beings countless convenience.Plus,we also should trust our government and scientists have capability to figure out ways to offset the drawbacks it caused.
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