托福备考作文,好吧,我现在水平还不行,所以写个简单一点的吧

a4522 (北辰天) 路人甲
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发表于:2014-06-27 22:25 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

题目  Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.


When the 2010 World Expo held in Shanghai,i had the chance to go.It was the first time I went to Shanghai, an international of cities.

In my 10 years of life,The first time I saw the big city. It gave me the feeling is big and many people. I can feel the tension every day.

If you give me a chance to choose a place to live,i Should choose the city.   It gave me a passion, a sense of urgency.    

Like when we were at school,  everyone in the pursuit of better grades.  It made me feel passion. In  my  hometown, everyone just need food and clothing. They did not pursue .I know their lives only too well. 

So I think the tension of big city is very necessary .  It can help us to progress, If the human is not the ideal ,the world will  be stop.

This is the reason why I want to stay in the big city.



各位大神手下留情,我水平还没达到能独立写作文,这些都是查资料,查句子写出来的
我是刚计划考托福,还不知道该怎么写,第一次发帖,有什么问题请严厉指出



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