托福写作常见错误问题影响高分

罗德教育国际 (罗德国际教育) 路人甲
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发表于:2014-10-06 17:21 [只看楼主] [划词开启]
今天,罗德国际教育托福小编要和同窗们引见的是留意词语的选择写作夺高分。同窗们控制相关的托福写作资料,对托福写作考试题的了解十分有协助。下面,一同来看看吧:
  关于托福写作考试作文置信大家都买了不少参考书,并且背诵了不少好段子,但是有的考生照旧作文不理想,究其缘由在写作时可能不太在意,好了,让我们看看专家怎样评点托福考试作文的常见错误的……
  1.构造不平行例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当运用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时分,应当运用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
  2.不知所云例:Many companies began using computers mouth.
  3.段落过长,不分段主语与动词分歧问题She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数方面不分歧。
  4.句子别扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辞过长或不清。换言之,句子显得滑稽可笑。
  5.不要运用缩写在正式的写作中不要运用缩写方式(can\’t,don\’t,it\’s,we\’ll,they\’ve等等),而应当运用单词的完好方式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等)。
  6.关联词语反复Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前运用连词。
  7.句子不完好Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.句子没有主要主语或主要动词,由于其实它应是一个从句。这是一个十分常见的错误,修正的办法是将两个句子衔接起来。
  8.不要运用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不正式,意义也过于模糊,不合适用在正式的场所。应将get改为一个愈加详细的单词,如become, receive, find, achieve,等等。
  9.书写难以识别信息不正确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不正确,或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(假如的确是正确的,应当解释为什么这样,由于读者不以为是正确的)。上述例句中,all的意义是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国降生的。为保险起见,应当运用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.虽然看起来象个单词,其实不是,至少不是个英文单词。运用这个单词的另一种方式。
  10.介词多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示这种意义时此单词不能与介词连用。这种状况常见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词,因此不能在它们前面添加介词。
  11.跑题或不相关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意义与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意义很普通大多数人都曾经晓得到了,因此就没有必要再说出来。
  13.标点问题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个十分普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中运用了太多的句号,特别是当他们用手写的时分。
  14.反复冗余Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意义的表述不止一次,或者某个词语不用要。
  15.单数/复数Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需求从单数变为复数,或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不能单独运用,应该将其变为复数方式或者加上限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary\’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
  16.拼写错误主语、动词或宾语有问题I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的根本构造有问题 短少主语、动词或宾语,或者这些成分反复。
  17.语气与文章不符I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语气与文章其他局部不相符可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
  18.代词指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词所指代的指示词(介词所替代的名词)不分明。
  19.过于笼统We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表达的意义过于笼统,不能提供几信息。
  20.动词时态错误Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.动词时态不正确检查一下是应该用如今时、过去时、未来时还是完成时等等。
  21.选词不恰当I was late getting home because I lost my way.在这种状况下不应该运用该词可选择更好的词语或者所运用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。
  22.单词方式不当I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所运用的单词的方式不正确检查一下应该运用该词的名词、形容词或副词方式的哪一种。
  23.用词错误Even I don\’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.用词错误或在此种状况下该词不是最佳用词。

  以上就是罗德国际教育小编对留意词语的选择写作夺高分的解说,希望同窗们经过阅读,对托福写作成果提升有一定的协助。假如同窗们在备考中遇到其他问题,能够致电罗德国际教育在线留学专家。

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