英语童书翻译海选大赛:翻译达人召集令!(已结束)

发表于:2013-06-07 16:44 [只看楼主] [划词开启]


沪江网协同人民邮电出版社、小书房,精心为豆蔻年华的小女生们选择了一套贴心的好书——“艾莉的手绘日记”,本次活动诚募“艾莉的手绘日记”系列图书的译者给自己不一样的身份!想翻!你就来!


活动时间:
2013年6月7日~2013年6月25日 征集试译稿,全国海选10强;
2013年6月30日 海选10强结果通过沪江网、人民邮电出版社、小书房官方微博公示。


大赛说明:
参赛对象:

沪江网注册用户,已满10周岁均可参加。

评选规则:

海选选出前10名试译质量较好的网友后,由专家评委再选出最后做翻译的5名网友。

参加奖品:
1.所有参加试译,并完成全部译文的均可获得5学币。
2.入围前10名额,均可
获得“艾莉的手绘日记”书一套,并获得沪江名人社认证
3.最终翻译的人出版社会支付翻译费用

评选人选:

漪然、边婧、张懿 、程雯、徐超、安燕玲、邬丽娜、王青、李一慢、石灵

(详细背景资料见二楼)

评委要求:
每位评委筛选出10位参赛名单,并在其翻译的内容之后,做一些点评和辅导。

郑重声明:
参赛译文一稿有效,请不要重复占楼,或者修改楼层,请一定要设为“楼主可见”以防他人参考。


参赛流程:

1.试译材料:

见附件中的pdf文档和word文,考虑到原文为图文并茂形式,pdf只供大家翻译时了解背景,翻译内容为word文档中的文字部分(具体内容见3 .翻译文字)。

2.跟帖格式:

1)提交个人信息,不提交个人信息的视为无效译稿,不参与评选,最后公布获奖结果只公布ID。

内容包括:姓名、性别、年龄、学校或者工作单位、通信地址、邮编、电子邮箱、电话、是否有海外生活经历、报名原因等,方便联系。

2)提交试译稿件并设置为仅楼主可见,供评委审阅试译稿件,截止时间为6月25日 

3.翻译文字:

page 1

As mom hands me Henry's leash she says with great drama,"Ellie,will the first act of your day be comedy or tragedy?"

I think she's been watching too many movies lately.Still, I know what she wants to hear,so I recite my lines:"Don't worry.I'll make Henry pretend to be a good dog."I'm kidding.He's usually good.

Mom applauds."Hurry back for breakfast!"

 

page 2

Ten minutes later the leash yanks from my grip.

Sweet,plodding Henry becomes the world's most determined squirrel hunter.The three of us race across lawns,around trees,through a sprinkler.

Luckily,I manage to dodge the first shower.

 

page 3

The second shower sprays me.

It soaks Mrs. Hamilton.

Wait-where did she come from?

She screams:"BAD DOG!!! GO HOME!!! My poppies!"

Henry and I exit, fast.

 

page 4

I arrive home to this scene.

Sometimes I think my family is auditioning for Wackiest Family of the millennium.

University coach Dad: ” Hey, sport! You’ve taken up running? Good for you! Step up to the plate. Your breakfast of champions is ready. ”

Josh wants to juggle, but it’s a struggle. “ Watch! No-look away! Okay, now-watch! ”

Pierce hugs Henry: best buddies for 5 minutes.

 

page 5

Risa's getting good at playing ukulele. “ Stinking, inking little Ellie, Sweating, fretting, wet and smelly.”

Cheezers.

Artist Mom: “Ellie, your color isn’t good. You’re 40% crimson with a tinge of hunter green. Are you feeling queasy? Let’s get you some ginger ale. ”

I wolf down breakfast and head to school.

 

page 6

On the walk to school,my friends have simple advice about that mean old witch,Mrs.Hamilton.

Daquon:Don't walk your dog past her house.Then he can't go in her garden.

Travis:Have a heart-to-heart talk with her.

Ryan:No! Fight! Be brave!

I'm glad when we're interrupted by Mo.

There's a good reason she's my best friend.

"This is it.My life is complete. Follow me."

Mo is sooo dramatic.

She practically drags me to see...

 

page 7

6th grade play: The Wizard of Oz

Mo needs to be Dorothy.

Visions of giant munchkinland flowers and cute little mushroomy cottages spring up in my brain.

The bell rings and the school day starts, but we're too excited to think about anything but the play.

 

page 8

Our English and history teacher,Mrs.Whittam, calls our class to attention.

“Mrs.Plassid will tell you more about the play soon.Right now, let’s focus on the industrial Revolution. We’re making robots.”

“You mean tin men?”

“Tin man or electronic woman, make it a marvel.”

She passes around a sample.

It's due in two weeks.We start with scrap box body parts:

 

page 9

The box is emptied so fast I barely get a look inside. I invite Mo, Travis, Yasmeen, and Daquon to come to my house tonight to make robots.

 

page 10

After history class, we're ushered into the auditorium.Mrs. Plassid, the reading teacher, reveals her big plans for the play:

*The whole sixth grade is involved.

*We'll have many important crew positions;not everyone will be on stage.

*We can submit artwork for a chance to see it printed on the cover of the program booklet.

*Our Oz production will feature music by the high school orchestra.It's a musical!




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