2014.03.07【英译中】give me some love

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Me and my guitar play my way             我和我的吉他一路演奏 
It makes them frown                      弹奏的音乐是他们皱着眉头
The little pieces by the highway         沿着公路一直弹奏
Bring me down                            带着我走下去

Mine is not a heart of a stone           我的心不是一块石头
I am only skin and bone                  我只是剩下皮包骨(?)
Thoese little pieces are little pieces of my own    我拥有的只有音乐仅仅是音乐而已

Why don't you give me some love          为什么不给我一些你的爱
I've taken a shit load of drugs          我担负着的是毒药(这句话真心不想翻译,不会啊
I'm so tired of never fixing the pain    我的累使我感受到了疼痛
Valia said to me                          VALIA告诉我
I'll take you seriously                  我将认真地把你带走
And we'll come back As someone else      我们将会回来,像别人一样
Who's better than yourself                还有谁比你更加好


Many faces at the doorway               张张面孔出现在了未知的途径 
ll hang around                         全都在悬挂着徘徊(这又是什么
Watch me fight in the hallway           看着我在道路上挣扎
But make no sound                       但是谁都没有发出声音
So standing all alone                   就这样孤零零的看着
And I'm only skin and bone              我只是剩下皮包骨(可不可以翻译成:我只剩下一副皮囊
So many faces but they all look out for their own   我拥有的只有音乐仅仅音乐而已
Why don't you give me some love         为什么不给我一些你的爱

I've taken a shit load of drugs         我担负着的是毒药
I'm so tired of never fixing the pain   我的累使我感受到了疼痛
Valia said to me                        Valia告诉我
I'll take you seriously                 我是真的想带你走
And we'll come backas someone else      而我们还能回来,像别人一样                        
Who's better than yourself              还有谁能比你更好


Why don't you give me some love         为什么不给我一些你的爱
I've taken shit load of drugs           我负担着的都是毒药
I'm so tired of never fixing the pain   我的累使我感觉到了疼痛
Valia said to me                        Valia告诉我哦
I'll take you seriously                 我真的想带你走
And we'll come back as someone else     我们将会回来,和别人一样
Who's better than yourself today        还有谁今天会比你更好

And someday                             和在某日子里...
Soon they'll drop the bomb              不久他们将会把失败抛弃掉
Let it all out                          他们都一边去吧(其实我想翻译成让它们都见鬼去吧
Someday!                                总有一天!
I know that someday                     我明白了某些人
Soon we'll all be gone!                 我们将很快消失!(?
So let it all out!                      所以让他们消失吧
Let it all out today!                   让他们今天都消失吧

And give me some love                   给我一点爱
Yeah give me some love                  给我一点爱
Come give me some love, today...        今天来给我一点爱吧


歌曲 本来打算是英译日的...发觉公司的电脑不能用日文输入法- - 嗷嗷嗷嗷嗷
大家来听听好歌曲吧~我蛮喜欢的一首歌

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