2014.03.23 【英译中】2 The lucky one 幸运符第一章(节选)

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发表于:2014-03-23 11:05 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

Well, what have we got here?" he drawled, trying to put her on the defensive.

 

“哇哦,看看我们发现了什么?”他慢条斯理的说道,同时给她穿上衣服。

 

He hadn't liked the fact that he'd been caught, nor was he pleased with his insipid opening line. Usually he was smoother than that. A lot smoother. Thankfully, the girl was too embarrassed to notice much of anything, and she almost tripped while trying to back up. She stammered something like an answer as she tried to cover herself with her hands. It was like watching someone play a game of Twister by herself. He made no effort to avert his gaze. Instead he smiled, pretending not to notice her body, as if he bumped into naked women in the woods all the time. He could already tell she knew nothing about the camera.

 

他不喜欢自己被发现也不喜欢自己平淡无味的开场白。一般他都比这要温柔,温柔好多。Thankfully?(让克莱顿感到开心的是。。这个怎么翻译呢?(@猫四狗八和@则少 心有灵犀的默契纠正谢天谢地那女孩感到很尴尬根本没有注意那么多,而且女孩站起来时差点摔倒,她结结巴巴的说着一些貌似是回答的话一边试图用手遮住自己(的关键部位)。这就像是看那女孩自己表演扭扭乐一样。他并没有试图把自己的目光从女孩那避开,而是微笑的看着她,假装没有注意到她的身体,就好像他经常在林子遇见赤裸的女人一样。克莱顿从女孩的反应知道她并没有注意到摄像机。

 

"Now calm down. What's going on?" he asked. He knew full well what was going on. It happened a few times every summer, but especially in August: Coeds from Chapel Hill or NC State, heading to the beach for a long, last-chance weekend at Emerald Isle before the fall term began, often made a detour onto an old logging road that twisted and bumped for a mile or so into the national forest before reaching the point where  Swan Creek made a sharp turn toward the South River.

“现在,冷静。发生什么事了?”他问道。其实他很清楚发生了什么。每个夏天这种裸体派对都有举办好几次,但尤其是在八月份:秋季学期开始前的周末,作为开裸体派对最后的机会,Chapel Hill or NC State?来自教堂山或是北卡罗莱纳大学的学生们会去爱尔兰岛的沙滩开始长时间的裸体派对。这些人经常会绕弯到一条弯弯曲曲老旧的集材道路上,在这条路上颠簸近一公里多然后进入国家森林后到达目的地——一个天鹅湖那里急转向南河的转弯处。(我承认 这整整一小段 我都很无能。。。)(@猫四狗八同学悉心翻译:那些从北卡罗来纳州立大学教堂山分校区来的女学生,会在秋季学期开始前到沙滩边上度过最后一个长长的周末。她们先绕远路从一条迂回曲折布满枯木的路上,走上近一公里,穿过国家森林才最终到达目的地——一个天鹅湖急转向南河的转弯。

 

There was a rock-pebble beach there that had come to be known for nude sunbathing—how that happened, he had no idea—and Clayton often made it a point to swing by on the off chance he might get lucky. Two weeks ago, he'd seen six lovelies; today, however, there were three, and the two who'd been lying on their towels were already reaching for their shirts. Though one of them was a bit heavy, the other two—including the brunette standing in front of him—had the kind of figures that made frat boys go crazy. Deputies, too.

 

那里有一个以裸体日光浴出名的布满鹅卵石的沙滩——这是怎么回事,克莱顿无从得知——克莱顿经常把这个定义做他偶然的好运。两周前,他看见过6个人;今天那有3个人,其中两个原来盖着浴巾的人已经穿上衬衫了。虽然其中有一个人有些胖,另外两个(包括这个站在他面前的浅黑肤色的女人)人的身材会让兄弟会男孩(frat boy是这么翻译么?)痴狂,当然也包括这位警监。

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