2014.03.25 【英译中】4 The lucky one 幸运符第一章(节选)

stormyzhong (harriette-媞澈) 路人甲
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发表于:2014-03-25 16:37 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

"We didn't see it!" the brunette cried, swiveling back to him. "We didn't know! We just heard about this place a couple of days ago!" She continued to protest while struggling with the towel; the others were too terrified to do much of anything except try to wiggle back into their bikini bottoms. "It's the first time we've ever been here!"

“我们没看见!”那个浅黑肤色的女孩转向他喊道。“我们不知道!我们只是前几天才知道这个地方的!”她依旧紧紧的抓着那毛巾抗议着。而其他两个学生由于太害怕了只是 (这一句我无能力。。。try to wiggle back into their bikini bottoms 大神救救我吧,@h0panpan机智细腻的翻译:手忙脚乱地穿上比基尼短裤“这是我们第一次来这里!”

 

It came out like a whine, making her sound like a spoiled sorority sister. Which all of them probably were. They had that look. "Did you know that public nudity is a misdemeanor in this county?"

 

这抱怨使她听着像是被宠坏的姐妹会的姐妹一样。(艾玛!什么是姐妹会??之前的兄弟会又是什么??)。也许她们所有人都是。“你们知道在这个地区公共场合裸体是不捡行为么?”

 

He saw their young faces grow even more pale, knowing they were imagining this little transgression on their record. Fun to watch, but he reminded himself not to let it go too far.

 

在知道自己的这些过犯会被记录在案时,他看到这些年轻的脸蛋儿比之前变得更苍白了。看着这些他觉得很有趣,但是他提醒自己不要做得过火了。

 

"What's your name?"

 

“你叫什么名字?”

 

"Amy." The brunette swallowed. "Amy White."

 

“艾米。”浅黑肤色的女孩哽咽到。“艾米·怀特”

 

Where are you from?"

 

“你们是哪里的?”

 

"Chapel Hill. But I'm fromCharlotteoriginally."

 

“教堂山。但是我开始是在夏洛特的。”

 

"I see some alcohol there. Are y'all twenty-one?" For the first time, the others answered as well. "Yes, sir."

 

“我在你们这看到了一些酒。你们都是21岁么?”第一次,其他的人都回答道。“是的,警官。”

 

"Okay, Amy. I'll tell you what I'm going to do. I'm going to take you at your word that you didn't see the sign and that you're of legal age to drink, so I'm not going to make a big deal out of this. I'll pretend I wasn't even here. As long as you promise not to tell my boss that I let you three off the hook." They weren't sure whether to believe him. "Really?"

 

“好吧,艾米。我告诉接下来我会做什么。我相信你说的,你没有看见告示而且你已经到了饮酒的合法年龄了。所以我不会把这事闹大。我会假装我没有来过这里。只要你们保证不告诉我的老板我把你们放走了。”他们不确定是否要相信他的话。“真的么?”

 

"Really," he said. "I was in college once, too." He hadn't been, but he knew it sounded good. "And you might want to put your clothes on. You never know—there might be people lurking around." He flashed a smile. "Make sure you clean up all the cans, okay?"

 

“真的,”他说。“我曾经也是个大学学生。”其实他并不是,但是他觉得这么说听起来不错。“或许你需要穿上衣服。因为你不知道也许这附近会有人在伺机而动。”他笑了笑(闪现笑容么?flashed a smile。。怎么翻译才好呢。。@h0panpan极强画面感翻译 他脸上闪过一丝笑容。“确保你们把这些易拉罐都清理了,好么?”

 

"Yes, sir."

 

“是的,警官。”

 

"I appreciate it." He turned to leave. "That's it?"

 

“那我就放心了。”他转身离开。“这就完了?”

 

Turning around, he flashed his smile again- "That's it. Y'all take care now."

 

他转过身,又笑了笑说“完了。你们保重吧。”


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