2014.04.22【英译中】Virginal Orgy(三)

则少 (则少 Elaine) 路人甲
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发表于:2014-04-22 12:33 [只看楼主] [划词开启]


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The back of my head got faint, like early 

Communion on an empty stomach, and that central

core,down inside me ,did the thing like a heavy gulp, with the rings 

of hotness circling out. And then 

he was kissing Liz,

I was standing within 

the standing bouquet, the inside of the tree not 

estranged to me ,the tightness and loose 

burstness of its crowded petals 

not unknown to me ,and then 

he kissed me again, and this time 

I had forgotten my mother-this was

my first return to hin, my mouth already 

wise in its hunger ,feeling as if nothing 

I would wish would be forbidden to it.

When he kissed Liz, I stood aside 

enchanted in cherry-trance,waiting for what

was promised and would return,as if by vow of matter,

the low central throat gulping in emotion

as if swallowing tears .


译文:

我后脑涌起昏厥的感觉,

就像早起空着肚子参加恳谈会,

我内心深处的核心,渴望着大肆吞咽,

就像铃声在炎热的空气中喧响(翻译无能求指教

他转过身去亲吻利兹,

我当时站在可以容身的花丛的里面,

树丛并不使我疏远,疏密有致的

一团团一簇簇的花瓣的我不认识,

后来他又吻了我,这时候我已经忘记了

妈妈亲吻的方式,我第一次回吻她,

我的嘴唇在饥饿时也是明智的,

感觉好像我希望百无禁忌。

在他亲吻利兹的时候,

我被施了魔法精神恍惚的站在一旁,

等待他所许诺的和必将回归的亲热,

又好像听从物质的誓言,低低的喉喽急速

吞咽着情感,好像在吞咽泪水。



未完待续。。。。

最后编辑于:2014-04-25 15:37
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