2014.6.14 【英译中】暮光之城2 OPEN BOOK (11)

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I kept my head down and glanced up under my lashes. None of them were looking this way. I lifted my head a little. 
我低着头,然后从睫毛下瞄了一下。他们没有一个望着这边。我再抬一点头。
They were laughing. Edward, Jasper, and Emmett all had their hair entirely saturated with melting snow. Alice and Rosalie were leaning away as Emmett shook his dripping hair toward them. They were enjoying the snowy day, just like everyone else — only they looked more like a scene from a movie than the rest of us. 
他们在大笑。爱德华,贾斯帕和埃米特的头发给那些融雪给弄湿透了。埃米特向他们甩头发的时候,爱丽丝和罗莎莉都挪到一边去。
他们像其他人一样享受着下雪的日子——只是与我们其他人相比,他们看起来更像电影里面的场景罢了。
But, aside from the laughter and playfulness, there was something different, and I couldn't quite pinpoint what that difference was. I examined Edward the most carefully. His skin was less pale, I decided — 
flushed from the snow fight maybe — the circles under his eyes much less noticeable. But there was something more. I pondered, staring, trying to isolate the change. 
但是,除了笑声和嬉闹,还有一些东西变了,虽然我不能准确地描述那是什么。我观察爱德华最仔细。我觉得他的皮肤没那么苍白了,或者是因为打雪仗而变得红润了。他眼睛下的阴影也没那么明显了。但还有一些东西。我望着他,考虑着,想把这个改变隔离开。
"Bella, what are you staring at?" Jessica intruded, her eyes following my stare. 
“贝拉,你在看什么呢?”杰西卡突然插进来,她的眼睛追随着我的视线。
At that precise moment, his eyes flashed over to meet mine. 
就在那一刻,他的眼睛突然扫过来,对上了我的视线。
I dropped my head, letting my hair fall to conceal my face. I was sure, though, in the instant our eyes met, that he didn't look harsh or unfriendly as he had the last time I'd seen him. He looked merely curious again, unsatisfied in some way. 
我低下头,让头发遮住我的脸。我敢保证,我们刚才对视的那一刻,他没上次见到时那么严酷或者不友好了。他只是看上去很好奇,但在某种程度上又有点不满足。
"Edward Cullen is staring at you," Jessica giggled in my ear. 
“爱德华 卡伦在看着你呢。”杰西卡在我耳边偷笑
"He doesn't look angry, does he?" I couldn't help asking. 
“他看上去不像在生气吧,是吗?”我忍不住问。
"No," she said, sounding confused by my question. "Should he be?" 
“没像啊。”她说,被我们的问题弄糊涂了。“他应该生气吗?”
"I don't think he likes me," I confided. I still felt queasy. I put my head down on my arm. 
“我觉得他不喜欢我。”我说。我还是觉得反胃。我把头靠在手臂上。
"The Cullens don't like anybody… well, they don't notice anybody enough to like them. But he's still staring at you." 
“卡伦一家对谁也不喜欢啊。。。他们都不怎么留意别人,更别谈喜欢了。但他还在看你啊。”
"Stop looking at him," I hissed. 
“别看他。”我嘘了一声。
She snickered, but she looked away. I raised my head enough to make sure that she did, contemplating violence if she resisted. 

她偷笑了,不过还是看向了别处。我抬起一点头看她是不是这样做了,打算必要时就施以暴力让她屈服。

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