2014.06.27【英译中】遇见精灵-睡美人背后的真相 《沉睡魔咒》(5)

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MALEFICENT 邪恶魔女(玛琳菲森):沉睡魔咒



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       Turning his attention once more to the sheep, the shepherd resumed his walk down the hill. Behind him, the boy lingered, his eyes glued to the Moors. He could just make out food on the ground, along with totems and talismans 护身符 辟邪物that swung from the branches of the trees that edged the faerie land. Squinting, he tried to make out more through the mist. Unable to, and overcome with curiosity, the young boy began waling toward the misty glen.

       牧羊人再次把注意力转回到羊群,继续举步走下山坡。小男孩的眼睛紧紧盯着摩尔旷野,在他身后磨蹭了一会儿。他本可以在精灵旷野的边界,在那些从树枝上挂下来的图腾和辟邪物旁边,吃他的食物。然而他却试图眯起眼睛,试图透过迷雾想看清更多迷雾里面的世界看到迷雾里面的世界。然而他做不到,而当他无法做到时,于是他开始无法克制自己的好奇,朝迷雾幽谷中走去。

                                                                        被好奇心打败的他/被好奇心战胜的他

       Moments later, he found himself at the edge of the Moors, the mist clearing around him enough that he could make out the rocks and small shrubs that covered the ground. Kneeling down, he reached into his pocket and cautiously placed his half-eaten sweet cake on a rock. Impatiently, he grabbed a fistful of dirt and spattered it around the rock. He took a step back and waited.

       片刻过后,他发现自己处在摩尔旷野的边界。迷雾散去,他可以因此看到周边的岩石和覆盖地面的低灌木丛。他跪在地上,把手伸进口袋然后小心翼翼地把自己吃了一半的甜糕放在一颗岩石上。他急切地抓了一手的土撒在石头周围。他退后一步,等待着。


       Nothing happened.

       什么都没有发生。

 

      The boy nudged the cake closer to the center of the rock.

       小男孩把蛋糕往岩石的中央推了推。


       Still nothing happened.

       还是什么都没有发生。


       Disappointed, the boy turned to go. The sun would be setting at any moment, and he needed to return home with his father. Suddenly, he heard a soft fluttering sound behind him. The boy stopped. Turning back around slowly, he watched with wide eyes as a pair of small, insect-like antennae rose over the rock’s edge.

       小男孩失望的转身想要离开。太阳马上就要落山了,他需要和父亲一起回家。突然,他听到了微弱的柔软的振翅声。小男孩停了下来。慢慢地转过身去。他睁大眼睛,看见一对小小的、像虫子似的昆虫般的触角从岩石的边缘出现了飞起来



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