2014.06.27【英译中】遇见精灵-睡美人背后的真相 《沉睡魔咒》(6)

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MALEFICENT 邪恶魔女(玛琳菲森):沉睡魔咒

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       Quickly, the young boy ducked behind a nearby stone, his heart racing and his breath coming in short gasps. The antennae quivered as if testing the air. A moment later, two tiny blue wings came into view, and then a brilliant blue faerie climbed onto the rock. Her skin was almost iridescent, like a dewdrop, and her colorful wings were mesmerizing as they fluttered behind her. She was the most beautiful thing the boy had ever seen.

       小男孩迅速躲在附近一颗岩石后面。他的心跳加速,心脏快速跳动着,呼吸急促。那触角像是在察探空气似的颤动着。片刻过后,一对小小的蓝色的翅膀出现在了(小男孩的)视野中。随后,一只机智的蓝色精灵爬上了石头。她的皮肤几乎是透明的,好像露珠一样;她华美的翅膀在身后扇动,令人着迷。而她华美的翅膀更始催眠似地在她的背后拍打着。她是小男孩见过的最美丽的事物。        

    队长版本:她的皮肤像露珠般晶莹剔透,彩色的双翅在身后扑闪着,令人着迷。



       Unaware his stone, the boy felt his nose twitch. He wiggled it, trying to prevent the inevitable. But there was nothing he could do. He sneezed.

       躲在石头后面,小男孩掉以轻心,感觉他的鼻子有点痒。他动了动鼻子,试图避免这注定发生的事。可惜他心有余而力不足。他打了个喷嚏。

躲在石头背后,他稍不注意,觉得鼻子有点痒痒的

       Spinning around, the faerie locked eyes with the young boy. For a moment, neither of them moved, each in awe of the other. But then, there was a loud bark and one of the collies bounded over. Before the boy could say a word, the faerie flew off, leaving the sweet cake behind.

       围绕在岩石周围旋转飞舞的精灵把视线定格在了小男孩身上。在这一瞬间,它们在充满对彼此的恐惧中,互相都一动不动。但是,一声响亮的犬吠声打破了这一刻,一只牧羊犬跑了过来。不等男孩出声,精灵就丢下甜糕飞走了。


       With a sigh, the boy stood up and began to walk away from the Moors, his mind racing with thoughts and questions. What kind of faerie had that been? Was she young or old? Was she nice or mean? Were there many more like her? And most important, where was she going?

       遗憾地叹了一声气,男孩站起来,离开了摩尔旷野,脑袋充满了各种疑惑和不解。刚才那只是什么样地精灵?她还年轻还是已经老了?她是好的那种还是卑鄙的那种?还有很多跟她一样的精灵吗?最重要的是/重点是,她刚才是要去哪儿?


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