2014.08.06【英译中】I Love You(Lyric)

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发表于:2014-08-06 12:09 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

I LOVE YOU



There was once a broken man
曾经有个心碎的人
who walked a lonely road
走在孤寂的小路上
and gave up all his dreams
放弃了所有的梦想
i was once this broken man
我就是那个心碎的人
stared into the sun
向着太阳
and just refuse to see
却拒绝阳光
i was lost amongst the clouds that would'nt fade
我迷失在永不消散的迷雾中
i was looking for an answer
我寻找答案
i was searching but i didn't take the time
我探索前方,却只是消磨时光
i was down and out and feeling so afraid
我一蹶不振,我内心惶惶
i love you
我爱你
the way that you turn me round
爱你令我心动
and chase away my blues
爱你驱散我的忧伤
i love you
我爱你
the way that you change my world
爱你改变我的世界
when i'm with you
当你在我身旁
love may come and love may go
爱会流浪
but now its here to stay
此刻到了我的心房
forever and a day
无所谓瞬间或是永恒
and when i see you smile
我看到你的微笑
i fall into your eyes
我跌进你的目光
to never fade away
那不褪色的光芒
i need you hear to make the dark clouds drift away
我需要你在这,帮我驱散乌云
and to make the mornings bright again
带我找回希望
i'm right here for you
我在这里,只是为你
and there's nothing more to say
再不需更多的言语
i am just happy that you're mine you've stayed
我只是幸福,因为你属于我,你住在我的心上
i love you
我爱你
the way that you turn me round
爱你令我心动
and chase away my blues
爱你驱散我的忧伤
i love you
我爱你
the way that ypu change my world
爱你改变我的世界
when i'm with you
当你在我身旁
it doesn't matter where we're from and where we are going
无所谓故乡,无所谓方向
as long as you with me all the way
只要你在我身旁
and the nights are long and lonely and
长夜漫漫而孤独
i'm waking up
我正在醒来
to find a brighter day
怀着对光明的向往




今天尝试翻了一首歌词,这首歌挺有名的。
因为歌词也属于诗歌范畴,正如小子夜所说,因为诗歌的特点造成不同人可能会有不同的理解,所以我是在自己的理解下,在语言层面做了较大改动,还请大家不要太纠结于字面意思,对于觉得译得不好或者您理解不同的地方,可以贴出自己的译法来对比欣赏~~ 因为我觉得诗歌确实会有很多种译法,也很难说哪种更好,各有特色各有韵味,有兴趣的话啊一起交流哈~非常期待各种特色译文啊~
第一次认真译歌词,有硬伤的地方还是请大神们指点江山,以帮我提高~~~Thx

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