2014.5.20【英译中】If I Were Tickled By the Rud of Love (二)

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If I were tickled by the lover's rub 

That wipes away not crow's-foot nor the lock

Of sick old manhood on the fallen jaws,

Time and the crabs and the sweethearting crib

Would leave me cold as butter for the files 

The sea of scums could drown me as it broken

Dead on the sweethearts' toes.


如果我被情人的抚爱撩得心醉,

却又抹不掉额上乌鸦的足迹,

也去不掉病弱老人鄂下的垂锁。

时间、螃蟹和情人的温床,

留给我的冰冷就像黄油留给飞蝇。

沉渣浮动的大海能够淹没我,

就像拍打情人沉尸的脚趾。


This world is half the devil's and my own,

Daft with the drug that's smoking in a girl

And curling round the bud that forks her eye.

An old man's shank one-marrowed with my bone,

And all the herrings smelling in the sea,

I sit and watch the worm beneath my nail

Wearing the quick away.


这个 世界一半属于魔鬼一半属于我自身,

愚蠢的女孩正在吸食毒品,

烟雾缠绕她眼上交错的花蕾。

老人的胫骨流动着与我相同的骨髓,

鲱鱼的味道弥漫就像在海上,

我坐下看着指甲下面的蠕虫,

快速的消失在远处。


And that's the rub, the only rub that tickles.

The knobbly ape that swings along his sex

From damp love-darkness and the nurse's twist

Can never  raise the midnight of a chuckle,

Nor when he finds a beauty in the breast 

Of love ,mother, lovers,or his six 

Feet in the rubbing dust.


这就是抚爱,撩人心醉的抚爱。

从潮湿的爱的私处到护士的扭动,

满脸疙瘩的莽汉摇曳着一身的情欲,

却永远无法撩拨午夜吃吃的笑语,

即使他发现了美,从情人、母亲

和同爱好者的胸乳上,

或从他风尘撩动的六尺身躯。


And what's the rub? Death's feather on the nerve?

Your mouth, my love, the thistle in the kiss?

My jack of Christ born thorny on the tree ?

The words of death are dryer that his stiff,

My wordly wounds are printed with your hair.

I would be tickled by the rub that is;

Man be my metaphor. 

抚爱是什么?是死亡的羽毛撩动着神经?

是你的嘴,我的爱,还是在亲吻中的开放的蓟花?

还是我的基督生在棘手的枝头?

死亡的话语比他的死尸更为干枯,

我喋喋不休的伤口印着你的毛发。

我愿被爱的抚摸撩得心醉,即:

男人就是我的一切。



迪兰.托马斯的诗,必须是要大声读出来才有感觉的。默念真的不可以,任何语言的分析也

无能为力。只有通过大声朗诵,去感受,去体会,那些词语的颜色与味道。他的诗不是用

来理解,而是用来感受。。。。



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