【父亲节活动总结】

桃子Lynn (艾羽) 译坛新秀
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发表于:2014-07-03 22:22 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

工作狗+轻微拖延症,现在才点评完做总结帖不好意思啦【90°鞠躬】

事实证明当初没有大力宣传是对的,不然窝现在也点评不完,2333333

所以在此首先感谢参加活动的米娜桑(虽然还是窝大二团捧场的人多嘞  2333332

 

昨天忘交代评奖理由啦~ 现在补上~ 其实参与的各位翻的都不错捏~ 奏是小错误瑕疵~

然后评委只有窝一个嘛,就挑错误少,然后顺我语感的的啦~

接下来奏是活动颁奖&感谢现场

活动一:

古风父子文

【中译英】

感谢参与者 @朵朵有致 @fallin2u @bun5290

获奖的捏 @fallin2u

 沈世说:“今天是过年。”

“It’s New Year today.” Shenshi argued.

 长华说:“来年我再陪你喝。”

“I’ll drink with you next year.” Changhua said.

“来年?”

“Next year?”

嗯,以后每个年我都陪你过。我保证。长华亲亲他的唇角,又重复了一遍,我不会离开你,也不会背叛你。沈世,你是我的心头血,我的朱砂痣

“Yep. I’ll spend every single New Year with you from now on. I promise.” Changhua kissed at the corner of his lips, and repeated. ‘’I shall never leave you, nor abandon you. Shenshi, you are the love of my life, and my only treasure.”

沈世望著他,很久很久不说话。忽地,他低下头,低声说:“抱我上床,我困了。”

Shenshi looked at him, without a word for a long time. And suddenly, he lowered his head, and whispered: “Put me to the bed. I feel sleepy now.”

一切发生的那样自然。

Everything happened so natural.

时隔多日的欢爱,再次品尝,滋味依旧美妙。

Although it’s so many days after, the joy of their embrace still allures.

沈世妖娆惑人的身体,长华年轻的肉体,交叠在一起的汗水。

The enchantment of Shenshi, the youth of Changhua, and the sweat on the pressing bodies.

沈世舒展开四肢,躺在崭新的被子上。

Shenshi stretched his body, and lied on the brand new quilt.

被子是大红色的,金线绣著鸳鸯戏水。沈世见了笑道:“这是人家新婚夫妻洞房用的,你个大男人盖这个做甚?”

The quilt is of Chinese red, with golden thread embroidering two affectionate mandarin ducks playing with water. Shenshi laughed: “Isn’t it used for newlyweds on the first nights? Why you, such a big man tuck it up?”

    长华压在他身上,亲吻著他的头发,双手与他的双手紧紧扣著,十指纠缠,喃喃耳语:“我们这不就是在洞房麽?父亲。你就是我的新娘子。

Changhua pushed him down, kissing his hair with their hands held tightly, and mumbled: “Aren’t we spending our first night? Dad, you are my bride.”

 

附上奖品图~ 获奖者任选捏~


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