2014年12月4,6日雅思考试大作文预测、解析及范文【沪江留学教研组独家原创】

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沪江留学教研组原创!雅思考试大作文预测、解析及范文!

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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


【题解】是否同意:传统的纸质信件会消失?


【大纲】

观点:手机和电脑上的沟通正在取代纸质信件,但纸质信件不会完全消失。

1. 信件缺点:

a. 传递速度慢,无法随时随地发送和接收

b. 电子邮件可以包含更多的信息

2. 信件优点

a. 手写信件更加个性化,有收藏重读的价值


【范文演示】

1) As a faster and more convenient means of communication, e-messages sent via mobile phones and computers enjoy increasing popularity. Some people believe it is only a matter of time that mobile phones and computers replace hand-written letters. However, in my view, despite the disadvantages compared with e-messages, letters will not disappear completely.

2) The most obvious disadvantage of letters is the low efficiency. Collected and delivered all manually, it takes several days, even months, for the letters to travel, which is unacceptable in urgent cases. By contrast, short messages and e-mails arrive within seconds. Besides, one can send and receive mails anytime and anywhere with mobile phones and computers. Distance is no longer an obstacle. With the unprecedented speed and convenience, people naturally turn to electronic messages instead of writing letters in the traditional way, especially in emergencies. 

3) Another reason why people prefer e-mails and mobile messages is the varied forms of information that can be included. Unlike traditional letters, e-messages contain various elements such as pictures, audio recordings, and even video clips. Links to web-pages are frequently used to provide additional information. In other words, e-mails are far more effective in conveying message than traditional letters.

4) However, the wide use of e-messages does not mean the end of paper-based letters. The hand-writing on paper represents different personalities of the writers. It also creates a sense of intimacy between the writers and the addressed people, since every word is addressed particularly to that person. Besides, many people like to save the letters, so that they can re-read the letters and relive the memories, whereas short messages are often fragmented and hard to save.

5) In conclusion, due to the invention of faster and more convenient means of communication, letters are less popular than they were decades ago. Nevertheless, they will not completely disappear, as they are loaded with emotions.


重点词汇及表达:

(a) means of communication          通讯手段(注意means单复数同型)

e-message                                        电子信息

(sb./sth.) enjoy popularity               受欢迎

obstacle                                            n. 障碍,阻碍

unprecedented                                adj. 史无前例的

in urgent cases / in emergency      在紧急情况下

paper-based letters                         纸质信件

a sense of intimacy                         亲密感               

be addressed to (sb.)                      (信件等)写给(某人)

fragmented                                     adj. 碎片的


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