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Writing task

  Some people think all children learn history in school is important; some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 

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    Subjects associated with life have been increasingly playing a dominant role in students' application for future jobs because those always underpin their employment skills. By contrast, some people think the function of history can be more effective than those subjects. In my opinion, I tend to be in favor of the latter viewpoint.

    The obvious argument is that the history of humans' development is full of violence, blood and wars. Therefore it seems essential for children to learn more historical knowledge at their early age and finally shape their own personal unique outlook. This approach greatly provides young children with independent capabilities to analyst the progress of historical events, thus coming to the conclusion on the right and wrong of these events.

  By contrast, subjects related to life are also essential part of higher education because those subjects can offer children more radical and easily-understandable knowledge which, to some degree, provide them with access to a whole new technology zone. Furthermore, young children’s brains are still programmed to acquire more new information, which facilitated further studying the higher level of courses, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by questioning stupid questions.

   There are, however, more advantages to learn subjects relevant to life. For example, young children would be encouraged to do some experiences by themselves so that they can more understand those theories that are gained through courses. To some original young children, they would tend to explore the most basic reason hiding inside a great range of secret life phenomenon, thereby creating more advanced things based on easy theories which are acquired through those subjects.

    In conclusion, I believe that not only can learning subjects more relevant to life be more beneficial as a means of laying the groundwork of cultivating abilities of exploration, and development of thinking skills.

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