【英文天天写】150131 Invitation(CXXXII)

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发表于:2015-01-31 20:00 [只看楼主] [划词开启]


Welcome to the Writing Program on Saturday.


【节目规则】
1、本节目是一档写作类节目,目的在于提升大家的英语写作能力。
2、每期节目选取当下国内外热点槽点话题,由主持人给出写作提示和范文后发布。
3、节目参与形式为:1)沪友递交自己的作文。2)除首层楼之外,其他参与沪友对自己楼上的沪友作文进行点评。3)主持人按照点评标准选取作文进行点评。

4、写作字数限制为100个单词左右。

由于主持人时间和精力有限,不能对所有沪友递交的作文进行点评,因此采用如下点评标准:
1、写作字数在100个单词左右。
2、除首层楼的沪友外,其他参与沪友要对自己楼上沪友的作文进行简单点评(可以从拼写、语法、遣词造句、行文结构等方面进行点评,不求多么精确,但求互相鼓励。因为主持人受限于时间和精力可能照顾不到每一个沪友,因此希望大家能够多多互动,多多交流,多多讨论。讨论和交流的过程本来也就是一个进步的过程。)。
3、在节目发布后的24小时内递交作文。
4、递交作文对所有沪友开放。因为点评数量有限,如果设置了“仅楼主可见”,那么其他参与沪友只能看到主持人的点评,却看不到作文。这样就白白浪费了一次汲取经验的机会。
5、符合以上条件的沪友,会按照回复楼层从上到下进行点评。每期每个小编至少点评10名,大家要珍惜机会噢。
注:考虑到有一些沪友会提前抢占楼层,随后才递交作文。因此,实际点评顺序以小编值班时的作文楼层顺序为准。

【今日话题】
 
Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Against
Against means in opposition to. What two things are against each other? What is the reason? What is the outcome?
This week's topic: They fight against the opposition... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) studying is like sailing against the current
2) a light object against a dark background
3) Team A playing against Team B in a tournament
4) leaning against a wall
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.


【例文1】 
by Malum


When Doug got a hold of the hard copy of the document, he saw his toxicology report amongst the pages. He thought about taking it back, but decided against it. The man would surely notice the page missing since Doug's partner already told him that the man had already seen the report. By taking it, it would probably raise more suspicion. While all the pages were being scanned into his computer, Doug used the time to go through the contents of the bag. There was not much. Doug was hoping to find the wallet, but the man did not leave it in the bag.


【作业作业~】 
请根据今天的Topic发表一下自己的看法。 
可以写的很正式,也可以很随意。 
如果正式的话,要注意用词和句式。 
Malum

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