2015.02.04【英译中】野兽男孩 · 王子与女巫2(1)

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Beastly.

怪兽。

"That Goth chick in English was weird," I said to Trey when we were dressing out for PE.

哥特女孩用英语说好奇怪呀,在换体育课衣服时我和特里说到。


"Yeah, she really freaked you out," he agreed.

“是啊,她真的快让你疯了,”他附和到。


"After ten years looking at your ugly face, nothing freaks me out."

“看了你这丑脸十年后,还什么事能让我发疯。”


"Oh, okay, so that's not why you've been beastin about it ever since we left English?"

“哦,好吧,所以这并不是我们离开英语课你就发狂的原因喽?”离开英语是什么东东。。。


"Have not." But it was true. When the girl said that thing about how I'd better not ever get ugly, when she looked at me that last time, it was like she knew stuff about me, things like how I used to cry when my mom ditched 'cause I didn't think I'd ever see her again (which wasn't far from what happened). But that was stupid. She knew nothing.

“才不是。”但事实上是的。当这女孩说的我最好不要变丑的时候,当她最后看着我的时候,这让我觉得她知道我的一些事情,例如在我妈妈抛弃的时候我总是哭,不知道以后能不能再见到她了(这件事并没有发生很久)。但这种想法是非常愚蠢的。她什么都不知道。


"Whatever you say," Trey said.

“你说什么就什么吧,”特里说。


"It was scary, all right," I agreed. "Scary that people like that even exist."完全分不清句子结构╭(╯^╰)╮

“这是很可怕,好吧。”我同意。“可怕那人就像存在的。”


"And go to this supposedly exclusive school and ruin it for the rest of us."

“去这所据说高级学校,摧毁除我们外的所有人。”


"Yeah. Someone ought to do something about her."

“是啊,该有人对她做点什么了。”


I really did believe that. I'd been trying to act like it wasn't a big deal, being elected prince and all, but it kind of was. It should have been a good day for me, but that witch had to ruin it.

我的确真的是怎么认为的。我努力表现地像这并不是什么大事,被选为王子,但这种事情是。 本应该对我来说是很好一天,但却让这个女巫给毁了。


That was how I was thinking of her: a witch. Ordinarily, I'd have used a different word, a word that rhymed with witch. But something about the girl, the way she'd looked at me with those freaky eyes, a color green I'd never seen before, made me think witch. Witch totally described her.

这就是我认为的她:一个女巫。通常,我会用一个别的词,一个和女巫押韵的词。但是关于这个女孩的,还有她用她那怪异的眼睛,一种我从来没有见过的绿色看着我方式,让我觉得她是个女巫。女巫说的就是她。


Later, in the gym, I saw the witch again. We were running the indoor track, but she wasn't. She hadn't dressed out but was still wearing the black flowing clothes from before. She sat on a bench below the skylight. Above her, the sky was dark. It was going to rain.

之后,在体育馆,我又看到了她。我们在室内跑道跑步,但他她没有。她没有换衣服还穿着之前那身黑色飘逸的衣服。她坐在天窗下的长椅上。她上方,天空很暗。快要下雨了。


"Someone ought to teach her a lesson." I thought of her words: You are ugly now, on the inside, where it matters most… you are beastly. What utter crap. "She's no different than anyone else. If she could hang with our crowd, she would. Anyone would."

“该有人给她个教训了。”我想着她所说的:你现在就很丑陋,你的内心,最重要的地方你就是一怪兽。全是垃圾。“她和其他人没有什么不一样的。如果她能和我们这群人在一起,她一定愿意的。没有人不愿意的。”


And in a second, I knew what I was going to do.

就在那时候,我知道我该怎么做了。


黄色是不会翻的地方。其实还有些没标出来了。。。感觉这部小说和原来书本啊或者翻译新闻完全不一样,很多句子找不出主谓宾。。。根本分不清结构,而且很多还是口语中的句子。对我来说是个挑战。希望小伙伴们多多指点了~

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男猪脚知道自己怎么做了,他会做出什么行动呢~那就赶快戳下篇看看吧




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