托福写作满分作文:广告

发表于:2015-02-05 17:27 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

    托福写作练习我们需要掌握大量的词汇语法以及长难句的运用,优秀作文总是在不断地修改下不断提升的。所以良好的写作方法及优秀的范文参考也是我们需要的。下面是社团君整理的托福写作满分作文:广告,供同学们参考!

    托福写作满分作文:广告

  Most advertisements make products much better than they really are.

  I strongly agree to the statement that most advertisements makes the products presented much better than they really are, and points below supports my idea.

  An essential reason concerns the nature of advertising advertisers, in most cases, would only make products seem better than they really are, not the other way around. Since the ultimate aim of advertising is to persuade people into buying something, and people would natually be attracted by something that is desirable rather than repellent, advertisements are certainly made to display a more attractive image of products. Therefore, customers would first be graviated towards the virtual product that is somewhat dishonestly pictured by advertisers, then desire to own it, and eventually purchase it. In this way, the desire of consumers is satisfied, the purpose of production achieved, and the advertising process completed.

  But the norm that a good product is advertised as a better one is often challenged or even reversed that is, unscrupulous businessmen make use of advertising to sell inferior products, which raises a moral question. For example, my mother was once attracted by a commercial of a encyclopedia which was claimed to be the one and only complete version of several ancient Chinese documents.

  She rushed to the shop and bought this limited version at a eye-popping price, and regarded it as one of the most precious things in our house. However, a few months later she found the same version was sold in bulk at another shop at an unbelievably low price, which annoyed her for quite a long time. We can learn from the experience that we should not always trust the advertisements that are apparently exaggerating products, and keep alert in the swarm of television commercials.

  However, the notion that advertisement always make us disappointed sometimes results from consumers' unrealistic expectation of products. Advertising easily makes people to imagine perfect products which are not realistic at all, but consumers would rather keep this unreasonable hope. Then they would be inevitably disappointed by the actual products which cannot be so perfect, and attribute the cause to advertising. But it is actually the unrealistic expectation that eclipses any product, because a perfect image is absolutely subjective and could not even be realized. For example, I once signed up for a group tour to Lantao Island in Hong Kong, being attracted by the beautiful landscape pictures posted in the advertisements. But later on in the journey I was disappointed because actual scenery was never as attractive as what I had expected to see. Therefore, an unrealistic expectation is to be avoided in making any buying decision.

  In conclusion, advertisements do make products seem much better than they really are, as a result of commercial propaganda and our unrealistic hope imposed on products. A better solution would be that both consumers and sellers keep a more realistic point of view, and avoid unreasonable selling or buying behavior.

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