能帮我改改嘛?很简单的自我介绍

发表于:2015-02-05 21:52 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

My name is SunYuqing.I come from Shandong of china.And I'm good at Japanese but bad at English.Now,I living Japan and I plan to learn something about animation in Japan when I graduate from this school.But I also want to learn English,because I enjoy speaking to foreigner.

下面是新概念二第二课的摘要写作

The writer always get up late.Last Sunday he got up very late.His aunt telephoned to him.She just arrived by train.And she was coming to see him.The writer said,'I'm still having breakfast."His aunt very surprised.Because it was one o'clock.


求改正啊。

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