I loved my trip

janejoinnow (Jane.wu) 路人转粉
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发表于:2015-05-05 20:22 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

I went to Anji with my families on vacation.

I like there. There are fresh air.

And There are many many bamboos in mountains.

My daughter was very happy, She saw the tiger show, and took a photograph with peacock.

The weather was both good and bad.

The first day was sunny and warm, but the second day was not only cold and wet,but also Heavy rain and gale.

The third day was cloudy.

Anyway, though I was tired, I loved my trip.


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