(奖品发放中)【7步助你攻克四六级】英语写作别轻易使用思维导图

发表于:2017-11-17 17:38 [只看楼主] [划词开启]

 

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详情可点击思维导图作业点评(by David老师)

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提起四六级和考研英语的写作,你是不是曾经指望过万能模板?是不是指望过经典句型?

但是残酷的现实是纵然这些模板和句型漫天飞,但是等你到下笔时却惜字如金?无法与题目结合写出有血有肉的好文章?

今天词场君呢就给大家传授使用思维导图这个工具。

为什么词场君不推荐大家轻易去使用呢,因为实在是太!好!用!了!哈哈哈哈,屡试不爽。

你不会再想到哪就写到哪,不会再写偏,写跑题了!(看家本领都交给你们了,还不跪谢?)

那接下来就跟词场君先看几个例子吧。

大学英语四六级考试作文多以这种二选一的方式命题,并需阐明理由。

因此一个清晰的逻辑就至关重要了。面对这样的题目我们首先要选边站!

选择一个你认为可以拓展开,有充分理由的选项!然后接下来就是论证你的选择了!

面对这道题,词场君想选择继续读研这个选项,可能你的理由会很多,不妨都用最简单的单词写下来随便写都可以

然后找找这些单词之间有什么联系,这时就可以用思维导图来帮你梳理了!⬇️



(思维导图中的关键词用加粗标注)

If given two options after graduation, that is, to take a job in a company or to go to a graduate school, I'd prefer the latter. (表明主题)

 

First and foremost, it is widely acknowledged that a higher level of education means better payments and more opportunities in the future in China. Therefore, I think another two or three years' investment in graduate education must be worthwhile in the long run. Secondly, I love my major and have a strong desire to further my study so as to deeply explore some academic issues in this field. Finally, the job market for undergraduate students is too competitive for average students like me to find a satisfying job. Thus, it would be a better choice if I could obtain a master's degree.

 

Considering the three reasons listed above, I would choose to go to a graduate school after graduation to earn a better future.

 

是不是很神奇?是不是只用把思维导图中各个关键的逻辑线索词串到句子中,这文章就一气呵成啦?

 

考研英语一作文以图表题居多。

我们不妨问问我们自己:你看到了什么?你会联想到什么?这也是作文的前两个要求。

所以思维导图在这个时候就可以派上大用场啦!(如果你觉得写英文麻烦,中文同样也可以的)

有了这个思维导图,我们可以用前三栏的关键词去回答第一问题。

然后总结出图片背后的意义,即回答第二和第三个问题。

有了这样的思路,接下来就可以放心大胆的写了!

 

(思维导图中的关键词用加粗标注)

  As is symbolically mirrored in the caricatures, there emerge two circumstances, carrying sharp contrast implications. In the first cartoon, a fashionable boy, lying in his sling chair comfortably, is looking at his whole shelf of books and saying, “I possess a multitude of books”. On the contrary, the second portrayal demonstrates an industrious student who is sitting in front of the desk and makes a realistic plan that he would like to finish reading 20 books in total within a year.


    The author of the cartoon invites us to focus on a truth that endless plans paralyze actions. There are simply no great success and achievements in the world that are not achieved through hard work and diligence. Similarly, a dream can be realized when you decide to work for it and persist continuously. Everyone desires to succeed, but not all his dreams can come true until he works hard to implement his plans. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams and always keep their feet on the ground. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are prevalent with the public, and even the students who enter the university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders.  

本段分别就“光想法无行动”和“脚踏实地”去行动进行正反两个方面的论证


  Accordingly, to succeed, we need to spare no efforts and hold fast to your dreams just as our nation sticks to our Chinese Dream. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, and even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you will find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.  

升华主旨


 

各位童鞋们,四六级又临近了,为了作文不蒙圈,不跑题,模板痕迹不辣么重,赶快把思维导图练起来吧!留个小作业,有兴趣的童鞋们可以试着画个导图看看,分享给大家,互相交流哦! 

 

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